《Better man》中文歌词的译文。。。 -BetterMan2004-04-21 05:51:44

Better Man by Robbie Williams.
　　Robbie Williams was the member of famous band Take That. Then he began his solo carrier in 1996, and this song was released in 2000.

希望各位高手，低手，新手，老手多多点评。
不必拘礼，想到什么就说什么。
译文在尽量重视原文的基础上，考虑了与原文的歌唱需要（括号里的词为歌唱时的过渡词）。

Better Man 坚强男儿

(A)
send someone to love me
给我一个爱人
i need to rest in arms
躺在你(的)温柔乡里
keep me safe from harm
身心得平安
in pouring rain
(在)瓢泼雨里
give me endless summer
给我永恒(的)夏吧
lord i fear the cold
我害怕(那)严冬
feel i'm getting old
岁月催人老
before my time
岁月催
as my soul heals the shame
灵魂(的)手...抚平(那）伤...
i will grow through this pain
苦痛中...我将成长...
lord i'm doing all i can
我已尽...我的力...
to be a better man
去变成坚强男儿

（B）
go easy on my conscience
我已经无愧良心
'cause it's not my fault
去面对(那)指责
i know i've been taught
可我已习惯
to take the blame
顺受逆来
rest assured my angels
恳请我的安琪儿
will catch my tears
擦干我的泪
walk me out of here
我和你(一起)远走
i'm in pain
高飞
as my soul heals the shame
灵魂(的)手...抚平(那）伤...
i will grow through this pain
苦痛中...我将成长...
lord i'm doing all i can
我已尽...我的力...
to be a better man
去变成坚强男儿

（C）
once you've found that lover you're homeward bound
找到爱情就得归宿了
love is all around
到处充满爱
love is all around
到处充满爱
i know some have fallen on stony ground
一些东西可能失去了
but love is all around
可到处充满爱

repeat （A）

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