【梅雨潭的爱】【Time to say good bye】以美丽回答一切文学城

以美丽回答一切2021-05-17 15:24:19

开了15年的爱车被冰雹砸了，被保险公司报废了。车子被拖走的那天有感而写。

【Time to say good bye】

It seems to be last night

You came with beauty and shy

Washed you all the time

Made you prettier and shine

With the years passed by

We traveled to parks and countryside

Even to cities mile high

So much joy and delight

Memories bring me smile

Also make me want to cry

Happy journey ended with hailing and flash light

Now it's time to say good bye

With tears in my eye

I cannot decide what to buy

A new convertible sounds about right

Will make me cool and my numbered hair fly

Hope my wife will not have my dream denied

Make me again a happy guy

盈盈一笑间2021-05-17 15:30:21

好有趣的小诗！短评最后两句:Happy wife, happy life. Make your wife happy first

以美丽回答一切2021-05-17 15:33:22

Absolutely :) Good point :)

ibelieu2021-05-17 15:42:54

I really like this piece; sad, full of nostalgia, at first, and

以美丽回答一切2021-05-17 15:48:33

Thank you very much for your compliments.

ibelieu2021-05-17 15:49:33

Good advice.

唐古2021-05-17 15:56:42

your love to your old car won't die

陶陶三2021-05-17 16:06:39

唯一美中不足，就是完美。：-）

beautifulwind2021-05-17 17:02:49

欢迎新朋友来美坛玩！很能押韵啊，厉害！也唱出来吧！也欢迎来参加【梅雨潭的爱】活动：

以美丽回答一切2021-05-17 19:41:40

I think so too :-)

以美丽回答一切2021-05-17 19:42:11

:-) Thank you very much

以美丽回答一切2021-05-17 19:43:02

谢谢版主：-）

轻轻的我来2021-05-17 19:46:15

Well write ! Old love is true love.

beautifulwind2021-05-17 20:44:34

U mean, new love is not true love?:)

日月茗2021-05-17 20:50:00

excellent writing!

以美丽回答一切2021-05-17 21:43:32

Thanks. Love is love :-)

以美丽回答一切2021-05-17 21:44:26

Thank you :-)

轻轻的我来2021-05-17 21:44:55

new love needs testing.

beautifulwind2021-05-18 04:26:42

开心日月茗再次冒泡！欢迎来美坛参加活动：

移花接木2021-05-18 20:57:34

这歌词真牛

beautifulwind2021-05-18 21:47:54

恭喜回答。首页进来，谢谢网管，Time to say good bye 推荐成功（推荐文学城首页成功）

以美丽回答一切2021-05-18 21:54:50

谢谢喜欢：-）

以美丽回答一切2021-05-18 21:57:36

谢谢版主推荐。

beautifulwind2021-05-18 22:22:54

等明天从首页下来之后，你可以修改主帖了，加个前缀【梅雨潭的爱】，会加入活动合辑，你也会得到奖品的：）

以美丽回答一切2021-05-18 22:45:05

Thank you, will do :-)

爱听歌的奥黛丽2021-05-19 00:31:47

写得真好啊！泪中带笑：）

以美丽回答一切2021-05-19 13:40:46

:-)

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