beautifulwind2021-07-05 21:50:52

本帖是激动观看花董主持的E外桃源颁奖典礼视频,及EZ问的一句话,刚用一小时拼凑出来:)

https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/mysj/227302.html

https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/mysj/238938.html

 

我怎么觉得我写诗就是语无伦次的胡说八道涅:)

不管了,重在参与!

 

If it were the last day of my life

(括号里是玉教帮我改的,很喜欢!)

If it were the last day of my life

Let me go to (the)North pole as I like

To watch the mysterious blue green polar lights

as (if)peacocks open tail feathers and eagles spead( wings)in the sky 

 

If it were the last day of my life

Let me visit the vast space with a twilight(twilights)

to experience my heart without a centroid 

floating  in the Mars with(in) endless time

 

If it were the last day of my life

Let me have a never awakened dream with Mars and a polar light (polar lights)

Let the dream embed on my tips of my long hair

to be with me forever in my life

 

 

中文版:

如果今天是今生的最后一天,

If it were the last day of my life

让我去北极

Let me go to North pole as I like

去欣赏蓝绿交相辉映梦幻瑰丽的极光

To watch the mysterious blue green polar lights

as peacocks open tail feathers and eagles spead in the sky 

如鹰击长空如孔雀开屏

 

如果今天是今生的最后一天,

If it were the last day of my life

让我带着星光去遨游太空

Let me visit the vast space with a twilight

体验完全失去的重心

to experience my heart without a centroid 

在火星上飘飘荡荡无边无涯

floating  in the Mars with endless time

 

如果今天是今生的最后一天,

If it were the last day of my life

让我做一个永不醒来的拥有火星和极光的梦,

let me have a never awakened dream with Mars and a polar light

把梦轻轻别在我的发梢

Let the dream embed on my tips of my hair

今生永远和我作伴

to be with me forever in my life

 

 

美语世界2021年三月E外桃源活动颁奖典礼及合辑

(请点击视频看颁奖典礼)

 

Needless to say how much chaos or what kind ordeals we have been through for the past year, and yet, more days still to come. That is something to remember in one’s life and pass down to future generations.

With social limitations and curfews we had to cancel our travel plans. Our feet are restricted, it is just a bad time. But a bad time should not make bad lives, there is nothing to stop the free mind. [E外桃源] is just such an event to share ideas of magnificent virtual tours. So glad to have so many happy souls together in MYSJ during this stressful time! For those who made contributions to this event, you are not sharing your memories or imaginations, you are passing positive energies. For anyone witnessing this event, your appreciation and comments had added much much more to this moment of joy. Today we are still confined but we are willing to do so in order that tomorrow we can reach the light at the end of the tunnel. Collectively we make ourselves stronger individuals.

Brothers and sisters, I am very delighted to announce [E外桃源] award ceremony begins, I wish you a very good time and enjoy your stay in MYSJ.

 

--- 移花接木

Mar/21/2021

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天玉之2021-07-05 22:09:54
沙发!
陶陶三2021-07-05 22:14:05
两蓝各得10分,美风得20分。美风此战平手!
天玉之2021-07-05 22:20:50
“Let the dream embed on my tips of my long hair to be with me
beautifulwind2021-07-05 22:25:43
哈哈哈,哈梅可要每天公布分数啦,本来还说陶导在热心记分,你可别在这儿舞蹈啊:)
beautifulwind2021-07-05 22:27:52
最后一天还剪啥头发:)我在写之前专门研读了你的说服,获取了写诗的灵感,要不是活动规则,我就把你也写上了:)
陶陶三2021-07-05 22:28:23
那以官方记录为准,总有一两个捣乱的群众,比赛才感觉逼真。:-)
天玉之2021-07-05 22:36:01
噢,我以为你从现在开始做梦,留头发呢,呵呵,a quick learner! 结构真是挺好的,就这么写,清清楚楚的逻辑关系,水灵
唐古2021-07-05 22:54:01
好诗!
beautifulwind2021-07-05 23:05:48
哈哈,感觉我在牙牙学语,还说不利索:)
easyboy2021-07-05 23:37:58
Gone with the Solar Wind!
beautifulwind2021-07-05 23:48:14
说得太对啦:)哈哈,我实在是写不出东东,就拼凑了几个场景,顺便也
easyboy2021-07-06 00:03:56
极光能给人带来两种相关的感官体验和遐想
移花接木2021-07-06 00:19:03
反正最后一天,来点摇头丸儿算了
何仙姑2021-07-06 00:59:55
躺平!
陶陶三2021-07-06 01:01:19
我看了美风写的,一天根本玩不下来。那至少得是个十天半月游。:-)
beautifulwind2021-07-06 01:22:39
哈哈,看来我是太自律太亏了,连咖啡都不喝:)花董,如果最后一天,你想干什么?
beautifulwind2021-07-06 01:24:13
仙姑你去哪了?上次一直等你的作业!赶紧,不管躺不躺平,为绿队加油!!!:)
beautifulwind2021-07-06 01:29:44
哈哈,谢谢陶导擅自延长了十天半个月的life:)
ibelieu2021-07-06 01:34:48
Beautiful poem. Nicely done. Love it. Well, I
beautifulwind2021-07-06 01:40:44
哇,你真看过极光!纽约居然有?!嘿嘿,我这是去Mars,不是Jeff Bezos去的地儿,不是自绑。:)
ibelieu2021-07-06 01:45:41
Yes, I did. We saw them shortly after the plane took off
盈盈一笑间2021-07-06 03:14:55
一箭双雕
beautifulwind2021-07-06 03:23:13
必须的,这我都嫌绑得少:)
beautifulwind2021-07-06 03:26:22
活动通知在这儿:
Ha654942021-07-06 03:53:52
无拘无束,写得真好!
天玉之2021-07-06 03:57:03
听你们这么一说,我想起我几年前也写过一首,是关于最后一天的,挺浪漫的,要不要发一下助兴? 可惜绑你没分加 :)
陶陶三2021-07-06 04:18:11
绑架之再绑架,我自己删了,送20分。
beautifulwind2021-07-06 06:25:49
谢谢哈美,辛苦啦!:)
beautifulwind2021-07-06 06:26:18
谢谢陶导送20分:)
Ha654942021-07-06 06:33:52
现在蓝 :绿 = 180 : 180 (算得对吗?:)
beautifulwind2021-07-06 06:40:55
跟在花董那,你算花董的了吗?算上他的就是: 200:190了,你跟在他的主帖下就好了:)
天边一片白云2021-07-06 11:38:04
美风的诗越来越有意境了。
AP339122021-07-06 12:01:00
很飘逸的诗,这飞天使在最后一天够忙的呢。
移花接木2021-07-06 20:46:51
来点摇头丸儿算了 - 移花接木 -
甜虫虫2021-07-06 23:29:42
Very nice!!M ars and polar lights:)
beautifulwind2021-07-07 05:15:54
白云你今天太棒啦! 明天接着绑啊:)
beautifulwind2021-07-07 05:16:55
哈哈哈,没办法,谁让只剩一天了呢:)
beautifulwind2021-07-07 05:18:18
虫虫现在就可以去玩scuba diving啊!:)
天山晨2021-07-08 02:29:43
好诗!写得有感觉,绑得好!
LYJiang2021-07-11 06:59:58
Kudos to you for your bold renditions.