WXCTEATIME2021-08-02 18:00:53

Why did I dream of you last night?  缘何梦君?

 

Why did I dream of you last night?                            缘何梦君?

Now morning is pushing back hair with grey light      拂晓暗褪

Memories strike home, like slaps in the face;            旧忆叩扉

Raised on elbow, I stare at the pale fog                     以肘支颐

beyond the window.                                                 透窗凝雾

 

So many things I had thought forgotten                  原以皆忘

Return to my mind with stranger pain:                    岂料忆溃

—Like letters that arrive addressed to someone      似笺翩至

Who left the house so many years ago.                  昔人已去




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观众而已2021-08-03 17:16:56
不懂平仄,韵律,改着玩,勿怪
WXCTEATIME2021-08-03 18:19:21
改的很好,四言一般不讲平仄,最多就是争取押韵。我也是写着玩的。