皮老师，这封信这样写可以吗？ ner2007-08-15 13:53:11

皮老师，
这封信这样写可以吗？
TO THE MAILROOM:

The enclosed AP Application should be matched with a pending I-485 for which no Receipt Notice has been received. The Immigrant Petition was delivered to NSC on _1ｓｔ July, 2007 tracking number 0306 1070 0005 6368 3273 by Ping
Petition type:EB3
Beneficiary's name: Xuan
Beneficiary's date of birth: 21st August, 1987
Beneficiary's country of birth: P.R of China

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