写出我的第一首英文歌曲“ Are You Ready", 感谢LiuMu提供的灵感 欲借嵯峨2021-06-26 15:35:19

把人家的英文诗改得面目全非：)

Baby, are you ready
Let's climb the mountains,
 While you stand by me.
Baby, are you ready
Let's touch the waves 
Let's go to see the sea
Baby, I miss your smile
Like whispering wind, you sent to me.

Baby, as we promised
Don't be sad, don't hold your tears
I know I am a fool
But I know you are my world
If you bled
I bleed the same
If you're scared
I am on my way.

Baby, are you ready
Let's walk in the clouds,
 Touching the dream
Baby, are you ready
Let me hold your hands
Say I love you

 

very nice shot!

Love is thick in the air! I love it.

能把英文歌随手弹唱得如此行云流水般流畅好听，你真是第一人！你的进步真是像坐了火箭一样！：）

能写词，能作曲，能弹，能唱的全能型音乐人！听得出来，这歌词里加入了歌者自己的元素和故事，还有情感。欣赏。

再听再赞！周末听挺好！

果然是高手，上来就baby ，直接了当

美坛出人才啊

will not let one u unturned;))

一直baby没停过；）

有typo吗？

动听！大赞

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