颤音2022-05-28 19:08:56

When wind carves


When wind carves
I rush to cover your hair with a scarf
But I tumble
amid wind's rumble
So the scarf flies in curve
to the rhythm of wind's swerve
till it touches your face that's void of crumple
Your face that keeps wind humble
For millions of years your beauty is conserved
by the wind that admires and carves


inspired by Lady in the wind in lower antelope canyon © 9 days ago

  
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Lou Lou.x - you create such a vivid image and scroll a piece with a good rhyme scheme and flow 

7 days ago 

 

G910513 - I like the imagery used here, and that opening line is a very memorable one.

8 days ago 

 

妖妖灵2022-05-28 22:56:41
画面押韵都运用得好巧妙!
盈盈一笑间2022-05-29 00:34:11
能写英文诗的,都是才华横溢的!
盈盈一笑间2022-05-29 00:34:59
+10086
颤音2022-05-29 05:01:36
谢谢,瞎玩
颤音2022-05-29 05:06:19
俺只是瞎玩 读过一些 emily Dickenson 的,然后心痒手痒就码字了
移花接木2022-05-30 15:34:25
我们这里上周, when wind carves trees branches got ripped off,