Twin chimneys 留言出乎意料 颤音2022-10-04 23:45:37

Twin chimneys

Twin chimneys spike into the night sky
Rises from them
not smoke
but truth
burnt by the environmental doctrines

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Likes: Orense, Dragos G

Dragos G - Damn this poem is brutal, the last line hit like a gut punch, haven't gotten such a powerful reaction from a poem as to physically move me in a long while

Great poem

留言太夸张，诗也比过马路逊色，不是因为观点，而是纳入观点的手法比较生硬

其实挺好，键兄要求果然高。不过诗的逻辑跟生活不一样，遇到对的人才会一下飞起来，大麻似的。：）

最后一句很赞哦。知对行错，人很多时候这样。

哈哈哈，去看了谁留的言，是个 teenager ，所以觉得好玩

谢谢灵隐兄拔高