颤音2022-06-11 20:29:58

Riesling,甜,尤其 late harvest

See you through a glass of young riesling

See you through a glass of young riesling,
drawing me are the dimples in your cheek,
where my heart’s swirling,
and sinking into the love I seek.

© 3 years ago, 
  
 

Likes: Lisa-Jane La Grange

Lisa-Jane La Grange - A beautiful romantic piece with sparkling imagery. Lovely work!  

Nicely written.

 

Ale, 苦

Dark Ale


Let’s leave all bitterness behind
and have one more dark ale.
Charge into that perpetual headwind
towards the paradise we sail
Sail, sail, till we see the paradise in our mind
till our brain turns pale. 


© 4 years ago   
 

Likes: Engellenkatu,

Engellenkatu - good poem and you had the wisdom to make it no longer than it needs to be.

Lovely

 

Sake, 烧

For God's sake


I refuse to wake
night and day
for God’s sake
shoots me far far away

My life’s endless karaoke
songs of pretentious deed
for God’s sake
that’s the medicine I need


© 5 years ago

Likes: FearlessBlue

FearlessBlue - Good job and well written I really enjoyed your rhyming scheme.

5 years ago   

 

问好坛子里的新老朋友

燕然山2022-06-11 20:39:37
哇,好棒,你也是老中坛?我看看,我可以念的,挺有韵律感的,好诗!
颤音2022-06-11 21:14:05
谢谢版主!等美声!这是俺曾经灌水的地方
燕然山2022-06-11 21:38:15
好滴好滴,我交作业比较慢,弄好了喊你来。
长木龙五2022-06-11 22:03:40
谢谢分享。
未完的歌2022-06-12 00:16:50
大赞颤音的英文诗,这一组全是酒。
陈默2022-06-12 01:41:01
写活了的“杯酒人生”。赞!
魔羯鼠养猫2022-06-12 03:57:37
你看过那个电影没?还有,你看过behind her eyes吗?
陈默2022-06-12 16:52:26
《杯酒人生》看过,你说的这个没看过,要去找找。