颤音2022-08-07 00:19:23

Slanted light on a shrine in the wall


A shrine in a wall
silent and worn
ignored by a nomad
who leans on the wall and dozes at dusk
But the dying sunlight
pulled and slanted by the shrine
shines on the shrine and his face

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Iffat Yasmin - Good write painting a mysterious picture, had to imagine the scene to enjoy the write the last 2 lines bring the whole picture to life making it meaningful

Clever piece

尘凡无忧2022-08-07 01:00:09
读了好几遍。。。喜欢这味道,读出了一种宁静。你有没有把昨天的中文诗译成英文来读读?:)
lovecat082022-08-07 02:24:42
这首也中译吧!
lovecat082022-08-07 02:25:59
才子发来的都是刚出炉的新鲜创作。
kirn2022-08-07 03:09:00
赶快把珍珠摆上来朝奉。。。哈哈,立刻闪闪发光
nearby2022-08-07 03:20:08
quite some flavors
颤音2022-08-07 05:25:23
谢谢啊!昨天的倒是先写的英文,翻成中文基本是谷歌,英文我找到贴过来
颤音2022-08-07 05:25:59
谢谢猫!我去找谷歌帮忙
颤音2022-08-07 05:26:21
A brilliant idea
颤音2022-08-07 05:26:42
谢谢近兄
浮云驰2022-08-07 08:56:45
Sunlight 是激动人心的