颤音2022-08-23 15:32:31

Between you and me


Between you and me
lies our puppy
He barks and snores, but doesn't talk
Yet, he understands you
He understands me
So, do I understand you

Between you and me
stands a screen
playing a silent movie
I don't understand
Neither do I, you say
So, do you understand me


© 9 days ago, love   
 

Likes: Lindsay V

Lindsay V - This made me smile. I feel the same way about my doggos. They bring us together

Lovely write

9 days ago 

 

Between you and me


Me thirty years ago
singing a thirty-year-old song
singing the errors that I know now
And the river that floats errors
winding and long
My song
your laughter
still flowing in the yellowed photo
The mirror behind us and the flash of the camera
cast the light that separates you from me


© 3 years ago,  love   
 
 

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- Really cool poem about time separating one from the people and memories of yesterday!

3 years ago

尘凡无忧2022-08-23 16:01:45
第一首巧妙,第一首美而伤感
CBA72022-08-23 16:10:51
Interesting poems. I see love Between you and me :)
kirn2022-08-23 16:36:12
有点时空错乱的感觉。。 小狗会游泳吗?
颤音2022-08-23 17:07:35
狗刨的出处?
颤音2022-08-23 17:07:53
thanks 7!
颤音2022-08-23 17:09:15
谢谢无忧,你本意第二首伤感?第一首如果回答是 no,可能也伤感
nearby2022-08-23 17:31:22
第一首有两句与无忧昨天的诗有异曲同工 :-)
lovecat082022-08-23 17:31:44
中文的也不错!
尘凡无忧2022-08-23 18:28:10
嗯,好吧,我单纯了,想都没想就觉得答案是Yes。。。
尘凡无忧2022-08-23 18:37:53
哪两句?
颤音2022-08-23 22:50:26
同问,荣幸
nearby2022-08-23 23:03:50
See inside, it is 3. BTW, don't take it seriously
尘凡无忧2022-08-24 00:05:28
哈哈,我找了找,也只能是这里了。。。邻兄看来跟我一样乐观,颤音说这里的答案是No。。。
kirn2022-08-24 01:00:09
The puppy must have been thirty years old....
颤音2022-08-24 05:14:01
哈哈哈,我还是啰嗦多了,花了三行字
尘凡无忧2022-08-24 13:53:49
:)