颤音2022-09-11 17:18:44

An ocean of moonlight


An ocean of moonlight
to my palm, chilly
to my tongue, salty
to my nose, minty
Despite the earth's greedy bite
the crescent still hearty
sings lullabies to the dreamy sea lily
and the reflected me


nature © 3 days ago, Vibrato 

   
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Likes: Casey Ligon

Casey Ligon - Catchy and poetic. I like your word play and the imagery in this one.

2 days ago   

lovecat082022-09-11 17:33:03
好诗!
nearby2022-09-11 17:40:40
海上生明月,甘香可充饥。赞颤音
七斓2022-09-11 18:13:25
心静才能欣赏、感知和品味。。
ling_yin_shi2022-09-11 18:43:47
哈,跟月色真够亲密的。不会是桐兄文中的那个色色的月色吧?
尘凡无忧2022-09-11 22:46:44
I like your word play too ...:)
颤音2022-09-11 23:33:12
谢谢喵!
颤音2022-09-11 23:34:06
哈哈哈,还是酒更好
颤音2022-09-11 23:34:18
谢谢
颤音2022-09-11 23:34:49
哈哈哈,你真能活跃坛子
颤音2022-09-11 23:35:55
谢谢,这个真是有些玩声音,挺空洞的
浮云驰2022-09-12 09:41:23
沐浴在月光中