颤音2022-09-15 17:05:58

墙上的枫叶

 

春天里你告别我去北方

为了还没融化的雪

留下我面对无语的墙

你画满了火红的枫叶

在秋风里握紧树梢

你说-

来找我吧

当墙上的枫叶落满你的手掌

 

Maple leaves on the wall


In the spring, you bid farewell to me for the north,
for the snow that has not melted.
Leave me facing the silent wall,
where you painted flaming maple leaves
clinging to the twigs in the autumn wind.
You adjure me constantly-
Come to me,
when the maple leaves fall and cover your palms.


© 3 years ago,  love   
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- You adjure me constantly- come to me, when the maple leaves fall and cover your palms"  This poem is beautiful.

3 years ago   

 

Andrew Blitman - Well done!

Enjoyed it!

3 years ago   

 

Ali Tajmir-Riahi - Very nice job please read Autumn wind, which related and you may like it

3 years ago   

 

Jenny Middleton - Carefully constructed descriptions that create an emotional impact.

3 years ago   

 

Ice Brat - I am into the spring and words you draw so vividly and strongly.

3 years ago   

 

- This sounds like where I live..evoked personal familiar..nice write

Great

3 years ago   

 

Bellsnoel - Fave line is Leave me...overall strongly written.

 

3 years ago   

 

- I really loved reading this one and also loved the atmosphere it conveys!

Thanks for sharing!

 

ExquisiteMind - A very contemplative piece of work. Keep writing more.

Lovely.

3 years ago   

 

一片枫叶

 

一片枫叶

漂了很远, 很久

从你的手

到我的手

橙红的时光

都由你收藏

而脉络里交织的伤愁

才是我的拥有

 

One maple leaf


One maple leaf
drifts far and long
from your palm
to my palm
Orange-red time and light
are extracted by you
And the sorrow intertwined in the veins
is all left for me to own


© 4 months ago


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Arathea - This captures such a pretty vision, and it's written wonderfully and in such a pretty way. Keep writing!

4 months ago   

lovecat082022-09-15 19:12:36
沙发。
lovecat082022-09-15 19:14:05
枫叶,像酒,也爱陈年的。:)
颤音2022-09-15 19:54:43
虽然干枯了,可不褪色,谢谢喵
浮云驰2022-09-15 21:17:40
悄悄的,淡淡的忧伤
lovecat082022-09-16 00:43:20
赞!
颤音2022-09-16 04:44:36
谢谢品读