记得古代说过小孩写作可以从写诗练起。娃参加了学区三半天的写作camp。他说他和朋友在playground玩时被几个女孩子“teasing”,于是就题写了一首诗:
Four girls chillin around
I wish one would fall on the ground
They think they're so cool
But they're just some fools
And then we would be crowned
Four girls swinging so much
If one falls, they'll be in a crutch
They walk so defeated
Cause they were just beaten
By two little girls who clutched
Now the girls disappeared
Because they so feared
Us were so strong
We're the brave and the bron
We scared them away with a cheer
虽然不是太正能量,但觉得可以即兴发挥地自然流畅,还是超出我的期望。这几年没看他在学校写的东西,平时没见他怎么写,也说不喜欢写作,但他挺能articulate。大家说说,这孩子写作可以推一推?