颤音2021-06-24 17:11:12

Clock with a halted pendulum

I have an ancient clock
Its long pendulum, motionless
No longer connected to time
But it has a quartz heart
Dancing to the light and darkness
Ceaselessly

Trace back year after year
I can't recall
When the pendulum halted
Was it your finger or mine
That accidentally shattered
The gear bestowing eternity to the pendulum


© 13 days ago, XX   love • memory   
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Likes: laughingpoet, Jenny Middleton

Jenny Middleton - I like how visual this poem is whilst making a point about aging and holding on to a perfect moment for 'eternity'. Thought provoking share. a day ago  

 

laughingpoet - Yes, great write I had a clock like that. Wait, I still have it, it looks too nice to throw away and too expensive to repair so no worries that time has stopped.

Nicely written

 

I stayed at a boutique hotel in New Orleans years ago. I saw this old clock as described in my poem in the hotel's lobby. I gazed at the clock because I was puzzled by the motionless pendulum and smooth movement of the clock's hands. One staff probably noticed my perplexion and told me that the clock's mechanic broke and was converted to a quartz clock. 

陶陶三2021-06-24 17:58:36
Nice! Everything is dancing. The halted pendulum is dancing too.
青松站2021-06-24 17:58:41
Grandfather Clock-:))&-Home-,hickory, dickory,dork-:))..
ibelieu2021-06-24 19:08:36
I had a clock like that; wait, I’m kind of like that. :)
beautifulwind2021-06-24 20:20:10
The plot of the poem is ingeniously conceived. :)
移花接木2021-06-24 20:36:25
真想象不出时间的尽头是什么
颤音2021-06-25 04:35:58
Real fun!
颤音2021-06-25 04:36:42
谢谢读贴
天玉之2021-06-25 05:29:26
喜欢上联,觉得可以结束在 “halted”,更有余味
天山晨2021-06-25 14:53:09
好诗!有联想!我有一个这样的表!也联想到时间那条无岸之河!
甜虫虫2021-06-25 20:20:31
This is a really nice poem. Love it!