慢兔2022-03-28 19:57:48

绿蚁新醅酒, 红泥小火炉。

晚来天欲雪, 能饮一杯无。

 

The wine is freshly brewed.

The stove is small but warm.

It's getting dark and ready to snow.

Would you care for a drink?

 

妖妖灵2022-03-28 20:08:41
很cozy很easy:)
妖妖灵2022-03-28 20:09:19
欢迎兔兔归来:)
WXCTEATIME2022-03-28 21:16:59
节奏感很好,好译。
AP339122022-03-28 22:40:00
很好!如果在wine 前加上rice 在Stove 前加red 念起来或生动些:)
慢兔2022-03-29 01:47:56
谢谢妖版:)
慢兔2022-03-29 01:48:23
也赞你的好译
慢兔2022-03-29 01:49:51
谢谢,可能那样更准确一点,不过我想把重点放在后面,所以前面的修饰就减少了