WXCTEATIME2022-03-30 04:36:38

《秋夜寄邱员外》

韦应物

怀君属秋夜,
散步咏凉天。
空山松子落,
幽人应未眠。

《A poem written at a fall night for hermit Qiu 》

Author: Wei, Yingwu [Tang Dynasty]

I was missing you at a fall night when
strolling and enjoying the cool weather.
Occasionally dropped pine cones broke the silence in the mountain,
you might hear it as you stayed awake.

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附许渊冲及文学城网友们的翻译版本:

许渊冲的翻译版本:

To a hermit on an autumn night
Wei YingWu

Strolling when autumn night is still,
I think of you and softly sing.
As pine cones fall in empty hill,
Hermit, you must be listening.

慢兔的翻译版本:

An Autumn night like this makes me think of you

As I walk and sense the coolness of the air.

The sound of falling pine cones echoes in the mount.

What keeps you awake at the hour this late?


美国王过人的翻译版本:

To Hermit Qiu on an Autumnal Night

On such an autumnal night, I can not help missing you so badly.
Chanting about the desolate weather, I stroll around to and fro.
In the ethereal mountain, pine cones are falling randomly.
Alas! Hermit Qiu, my dear friend, you must be sleepless like me also.


ibelieu翻译的版本:

Thinking of you this autumn night happens to find me,

While strolling and crooning a poem about the chilliness.

Heard falling in deserted mountains pine cones can be,

This, I guess, must be causing our hermit to be sleepless.

 


     



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妖妖灵2022-03-30 05:09:07
谢谢茶诗人把美坛童鞋们的翻译都总结出来,精彩纷呈,各有千秋:)
WXCTEATIME2022-03-30 05:28:30
应该的,异彩纷呈。
LinMu2022-03-30 13:37:19
茶兄好译。
WXCTEATIME2022-03-30 15:24:43
谢林兄,也试试吧:)
梅雨潭2022-03-31 03:50:06
恭喜茶诗人慢兔王过信大师。首页进来,谢谢网管,唐诗英译】A poem written at a fall推荐成功
忒忒绿2022-03-31 15:16:00
WXCTEATIME2022-03-31 17:48:45
多谢各位:)
WXCTEATIME2022-03-31 17:49:13
谢谢:)