A door in the desert 颤音2022-07-13 20:42:20

A door in the desert

A door in the desert
stands wide and tall
alone without attached wall
But no one dares to avert
because people see through it an oasis
because people are chased by a crisis

Let's line up and walk through the door
Chants from the front of the crowd
Why can't we walk around the door
A murmur from the middle of the crowd
from a blind man's blind boar

vague © 10 hours ago, rhyme   
 

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HeartLess Smile - Sounded like something you would find in alice and wonderland. What a fun intriguing poem, good job and keep writing.

4 hours ago

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赞想象力。。。：）

再赞颤音，韵律和意境到很妙

A crowd in a desert, a boar at the door。。意境玄乎啊。赞

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谢谢所有美言，俺就是想说不能一根筋

赞！寓意深刻，blind sees better than those who can see.

谢谢