颤音2022-09-24 00:44:56

The grooves you carve


The grooves you carve
half a mile long
in gray scale
major and minor
flat and sharp
sing chord and dischord
born ages ago
from the colored waves
from your fingers combing through my black hair
and the sparks that blind my eyes

The grooves you carve
wind in my cortex
wrinkled and fissured
deep and shallow
The grooves you carve
sing eternally
although you vanish with the sapphire stylus


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Darya Falay Goldmann - I like the style and word combination you used. Really interesting to read and feel the poem

3 hours ago

冯墟2022-09-24 01:09:35
minor issue
nearby2022-09-24 01:18:49
猫猫请来翻译
尘凡无忧2022-09-24 01:34:21
浪漫啊,缠绵啊。。。:)
尘凡无忧2022-09-24 01:39:15
颤音应当在美国。:)去查了查,冯墟应当是记反了,gray一般是US写法,grey是UK写法。。。
颤音2022-09-24 01:41:39
谢谢您的意见,我就是瞎玩,没有严谨的科学态度
颤音2022-09-24 01:43:46
应该用 grey , 因为我念念不忘 fifty shades of grey
尘凡无忧2022-09-24 01:44:50
LOL
冯墟2022-09-24 01:50:05
我错。在两国,这两种拼法都可以。只恨识字不多啊。
冯墟2022-09-24 01:53:15
不是大问题。Sylvia Plath读高中时,老师不认同她对朝霞的描述。过两天,她七点钟准时把老师揪去一起看日出。当然是
ling_yin_shi2022-09-24 02:05:25
纯净,忧伤,古典。360度转体赞。:)
七斓2022-09-24 03:28:49
喜欢唱片 :-)
花似鹿葱2022-09-24 13:07:01
哈哈,很坦诚。。。
颤音2022-09-24 17:13:34
哈哈哈,有万能的谷歌
颤音2022-09-24 17:13:52
谢谢无忧
颤音2022-09-24 17:14:17
谢谢灵隐兄
颤音2022-09-24 17:14:35
谢谢