爪四哥2021-08-18 01:19:43

什么叫班门弄斧,关公面前舞大刀,孔老二面前卖三字经,爪哥就是呵呵

写了首英文歌曲,在各位大佬面前,“秀”一下爪哥的英文写作水平。。。大概属于美国小学一年级吧。
 

-- I will not let you cry --

     千金一诺为红颜)

Flying through the blue sky,

Flying through the sky.

Flying into Spring,

Winter’s out of sight.

Jumping into loving tides,

Jumping in the tide

You say,

You love me,

I won’t let you cry. 


Seeing your smile,

I will feel great.

Owning your heart,

Tomorrow is tonight.

Let’s sing a loving song with the butterfly,

You say,

You love me,

I won’t let you cry.


Running into your heart,

Running in your heart.

Running into the Merry,

Blue is out of sight.

Jumping into loving tides,

Jumping in the tide

You say,

You love me,

I won’t let you cry.

Seeing your smile,

I will feel great.

Owning your heart,

Tomorrow is tonight.

Let’s sing a loving song with the butterfly,

You say,

You love me,

I won’t let you cry. 

瞧瞧,如假包换的小学一年级写作水瓶,还挂了满满一腚。用京味儿英语唱出来,也很般配...
 



瞧瞧,如假包换的儿歌水平嘻嘻

爪四哥2021-08-18 01:21:53
给盈盈,美风交作业
欲借嵯峨2021-08-18 02:08:00
很不错!把四二拍改成四三或四四拍就和歌词意境吻合了,现在是儿歌节奏
Lily20052021-08-18 02:10:00
词写好,唱得更好,字正腔圆,清唱高水平!
AP339122021-08-18 02:18:00
听到四哥(此时叫四弟)年青的声音,没听到京味挺好的,还有金句:tomorrow is tonight.
陶陶三2021-08-18 04:11:01
After hearing “I will not let you cry”, she cried. :-)
beautifulwind2021-08-18 04:23:03
厉害啊!居然是英文版的词曲唱一体!英文押韵很棒!爪就这样变成了牛!:)
爪四哥2021-08-18 12:30:15
老牛自知夕阳晚,不须扬鞭自奋爪 :-)
爪四哥2021-08-18 12:31:10
true, it happened
爪四哥2021-08-18 12:32:44
tomorrow is tonight,翻译成中文,就是。。。
爪四哥2021-08-18 12:33:39
欲哥给改改,改成。。
爪四哥2021-08-18 12:34:07
谢谢美盐谷粒
AP339122021-08-18 14:32:00
Or 我心太急,我心太急......
盈盈一笑间2021-08-18 16:11:58
哎呀,来晚了。爪哥这作业,满分啊。写词作曲演唱俱佳。三栖明星啊。膜拜俺师父~ ~
移花接木2021-08-18 21:14:44
至少每句话都make sense,且满满的美感! 现在还听不了,看着歌词觉得好像上来就象是副歌,然后是主歌,与通常的歌相反.
beautifulwind2021-08-19 05:12:59
恭喜爪哥。首页进来,谢谢网管,COSPLAY活动 I will not let you cry(千金一诺为红颜)推荐成功
甜虫虫2021-08-20 19:26:53
Very nice!
天山晨2021-08-21 03:22:08
四哥唱的很好,非常有味道!