My Father and I Shine Together Like the Sun and the Moon CBA72022-06-23 17:59:31

My Father and I Shine Together Like the Sun and the Moon

When my father was here
He was the sun
I was the moon in his hand

When my father is gone
He is the moon
I am the sun in his dream

我和父亲日月同辉

父亲在的时候
他是太阳
我是他手里的月亮

父亲走了之后
他是月亮
我是他梦里的太阳

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The moon shines since it is kissed by the sun

时态运用得好清楚～ 再次感叹主语宾语的巧妙转换。

恭喜小7。首页进来，谢谢网管，My Father and I Shine Together Like the Sun推荐

Thank you for your beautiful and kind words.

再次谢灵灵。

多谢梅雨潭版主。

a good idea

Thank you.

点赞。很棒。

构思巧妙！

谢谢。

谢谢鼓励。