CBA72022-10-19 15:14:27

《What's Your Language?》

love
answers a British girl 
counting the ravens on Tower Bridge

amor
shouts a Spanish boy
kicking a ball in a soccer field

amour
says a French woman 
sitting on the black iron bench under a sycamore tree

Liebe
whispers a German gentleman 
riding a white horse in a forest


speaks a Chinese lady 
walking on the Great Wall with a purple skirt

【备注】这首英文诗于10月7日发表在Allproetry,并在当天被选上了首页。Allpoetry is the world's largest and best poetry site. 下面是评分(Autorank)和部分评论(Comments):

Autorank Total 10 ( higher is reduced to 10 ), professional similarity 10 (of 10), concrete vs abstract 2 (of 2)

Likes: Ray Cope, Sand Singer, Jferry, Skyoak37, Treepower34, kaye, Rawena, Rowan Fox, Samara, LinaLNU, Poetryan, Ava L, Joy2B, Stiff Little Shrew, Adventurous, brendan law, Cexi Steph, Dark Migration

Poetryan - Grá  (love)
responds an Irish boy
reading a lovely poem in the comfort of a home

Jferry - Yes, there are several ways and languages in which to celebrate love. And we should celebrate that fact ... as this lovely poem does.

Stiff Little Shrew - Great idea. Perhaps all languages are languages of love after all.

P.S. The Tower of London is famous for it's ravens, below are the links about the ravens on Tower Bridge:

The Ravens at the Tower of London, England (historic-uk.com)

Ravens of the Tower of London - Wikipedia

中文版本

《什么是你的语言?》


一个英国女孩回答
她在数塔桥上的乌鸦


一个西班牙男孩喊道
他在足球场踢球


一个法国女人说
她坐在梧桐树下的黑色铁椅上


一位德国绅士低语
他在森林里骑着一匹白马


一位中国女士说
她穿着紫色的裙子走在长城上




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尘凡无忧2022-10-19 16:36:15
构思巧妙,为啥除了中国都是欧洲国家?:)
CBA72022-10-19 17:16:07
谢谢忧忧点评。好问题,因为这几种语言大家最熟悉,最有代表性 :)
nearby2022-10-19 17:17:45
That Chinese lady must be CBA7
CBA72022-10-19 17:20:55
She can be any Chinese lady. If you prefer me, no problem :)
番桥2022-10-20 14:50:30
写得好!像爱,妈妈,美这种词汇,应该创造一种universal language来,全世界通用。
CBA72022-10-20 15:04:09
谢谢番桥的感言和鼓励。