颤音2022-07-13 03:09:31

A door in the desert


A door in the desert
stands wide and tall
alone without attached wall
But no one dares to avert
because people see through it an oasis
because people are chased by a crisis


Let's line up and walk through the door
Chants from the front of the crowd
Why can't we walk around the door
A murmur from the middle of the crowd
from a blind man's blind boar


vague © 10 hours ago, rhyme   
 

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HeartLess Smile - Sounded like something you would find in alice and wonderland. What a fun intriguing poem, good job and keep writing.

4 hours ago

忒忒绿2022-07-13 04:07:00
a nice piece. bravo to vibrato!
妖妖灵2022-07-13 19:22:26
Fairy tale~
颤音2022-07-14 03:41:55
谢谢绿!
颤音2022-07-14 03:42:19
谢谢110!
CBA72022-07-14 04:47:22
赞!寓意深刻,blind sees better than those who can see.
盈盈一笑间2022-07-14 21:03:14
真好!这门的寓意是什么?写的是那扇窄门吗?
梅雨潭2022-07-14 21:37:15
恭喜颤音。首页进来,谢谢网管,A door in the desert 推荐成功
颤音2022-07-15 04:55:19
谢谢舵主和网管
颤音2022-07-15 04:59:42
谢谢,等读的人加 哈哈哈