颤音2022-08-07 15:09:06

Slanted light on a shrine in the wall


A shrine in a wall
silent and worn
ignored by a nomad
He leans on the wall
and dozes at dusk
But the dying sunlight
pulled and slanted by the shrine
shines on the shrine and his face

 

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Iffat Yasmin - Good write painting a mysterious picture, had to imagine the scene to enjoy the write the last 2 lines bring the whole picture to life making it meaningful

Clever piece




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移花接木2022-08-07 16:14:29
不太懂shrine in a wall.shrine 是个建筑/结构可以包含n面墙。wall in a shrine
妖妖灵2022-08-07 17:04:44
太细腻了。
chuntianle2022-08-07 20:33:01
很棒。周末愉快。
颤音2022-08-07 22:44:38
谢谢
颤音2022-08-07 22:44:51
谢谢,mini 的
颤音2022-08-07 22:45:11
谢谢110
kirn2022-08-08 00:47:13
哈哈
盈盈一笑间2022-08-09 00:26:32
能这样安静写诗真好