Shredded yesterday
Shredded yesterday
floats in the air
I snatch one piece
and wish it were you
Shredded light
scatters in the room
I stare at one corner
and wish it were you
Shredded silence
fills the ocean
I surf one wave
and wish it were you
love © a day ago
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Likes: Mentalist, Sea Glass, Keng
Sea Glass - for me this brevity speaks volumes of missing and wanting a loved one
Lovely
a day ago
Keng - i enjoyed. flows nice and the feeling of loss comes through. If i could be bold - not sure of "shredded" for me "goodbye" works nice too, and is more expressive of loss maybe.
a day ago
Mentalist - Beautiful ways art craft with fine and wonderful ways of expression in wonders.
Clever write
a day ago