颤音2022-09-27 14:58:33

In a half-shaded street


In a half-shaded street
sunlight draws a line on the pebble stones
Wait for the green crossing light
you on the south end in the shadow
me on the north end in the light
Impatiently, our eyes scan the street
and greet
where light and shadow meet
Fulfilling our initial wish, the crossing light turns green
Hesitantly, I start walking into the growing shadow
and you start walking into the dying light


encounter © 23 hours ago, love   
 

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Nunoftferreira - Well composed and interesting piece of poetry you have crafted and shared with a very good flow

23 hours ago

lovecat082022-09-27 15:48:44
沙发
lovecat082022-09-27 15:49:21
赞新作,没中译?
颤音2022-09-27 17:26:30
谢谢喵, 来个谷歌版
lovecat082022-09-27 17:34:24
译出十字路口的感觉。
lovecat082022-09-27 17:34:46
好耶!
西东人82022-09-27 19:47:54
这条街在DOWNTOWN吗?内城? :)
浮云驰2022-09-27 21:32:01
光连着街道连着人,颤音特别喜欢写光影啊
ling_yin_shi2022-09-27 23:32:30
说话前先问一下,这一首什么时候写的?:)怕说早了自己打脸。
颤音2022-09-28 01:16:31
灵隐兄,只管评,倒是刚写的
颤音2022-09-28 01:19:00
电影十字街头
颤音2022-09-28 01:19:47
downtown 不安全 哈哈
颤音2022-09-28 01:20:44
谢々,着魔了。
ling_yin_shi2022-09-28 01:21:33
兄文风大有变化,说明进化啦!以前是光和shadow,现在有绿光,green light,
颤音2022-09-28 02:30:06
哈哈哈,话说摄影,我还是喜欢黑白的
ling_yin_shi2022-09-28 09:42:27
同感。:)可能彩色显示的内容太满,影响表达的重点。