ctaag2021-11-04 00:59:37

原诗五言,试试译成五个 syllables 一行,1,2,4 行押韵。

Beanstalk fire boils Beans,

In the pot sob Beans,

"Beans and Stalks share roots,

Why are Stalks this mean?"

心存善念2021-11-04 02:02:18
也来个简节的
妖妖灵2021-11-04 02:21:39
押韵真好。今天真是和绿诗人学习了注意字节,对写歌词也很有帮助
beautifulwind2021-11-08 01:48:37
恭喜ctaag。首页进来,谢谢网管,受忒忒绿启发,简化7步诗的译文 推荐成功