康赛欧2022-04-07 19:25:13

 

缓缓的春风吹拂着大地,

缓缓地复苏万物生灵。

缓缓的悠扬早春的歌声,

缓缓地激荡在我心里。                     

 

缓缓的我踏着你的足迹,

缓缓地靠进你的身旁。

缓缓的春宵一刻值千金,

缓缓地滋润爱的路程。

 

缓缓地听夜莺歌唱,
缓缓地看日出日落。
缓缓地感天动地,
缓缓地爱到深处。

 

The slow spring breeze blows the earth,

Reviving all natures slowly.

The slow melodious song of early spring,

Stirring in my heart slowly.

 

The slow walk follows your footsteps,

Going towards you slowly.

The slow time of spring night is priceless,

Nourishing the journey of love slowly.

 

Slowly listen to the nightingale singing,

Slowly watch the sunrise and sunset,

Slowly inspire the sky and earth,

Slowly love you to the depth.

 

 

康赛欧2022-04-07 19:26:29
我前些日子写的这首诗,把它翻成了英文现代诗。请多指教,谢谢!
WXCTEATIME2022-04-07 22:35:22
我觉得译成英文的诗很好,有节奏有变化。
妖妖灵2022-04-07 22:47:04
英文版真好,紧扣一个slowly,full of tranquility ,中文版要是押韵会更完美!
移花接木2022-04-07 23:12:05
都好,一句形容词修饰主语,一句副词修饰谓语,别翻译时一不留神修饰错了,如果只听不看字肯定会张冠李戴
疏影笑寒2022-04-08 15:21:29
Beautiful!
梅雨潭2022-04-08 22:00:56
恭喜康赛欧。首页进来,谢谢网管,汉译英 诗《缓缓地爱到深处》《Slowly love you in-depth》推荐成功
康赛欧2022-04-09 13:46:59
谢谢!
康赛欧2022-04-09 13:49:32
谢谢!
康赛欧2022-04-09 13:50:29
谢谢!
康赛欧2022-04-09 13:50:55
谢谢!
康赛欧2022-04-09 13:51:17
谢谢版主!我都忘记发到美坛了,今早无意间看到。