颤音2022-05-18 00:36:30

Dust


In a slender and willow-lined alley
hides a lonely old tea house
A trace of the sun in late spring
squeezes through the mottled wooden windows
and lights up the wandering dust
who's daydreaming a fireworks-filled night

The crescent moon is hiding in the clouds
and shuts tightly the doors and windows of dreams
Embracing loneliness of the deep alley
a breeze whisks beyond the eaves
and never hears the dust's bellow
that's as silent as its mother, soil
© a month ago, 

Likes: ChrisW, AP YouxiaHaikusaur, Lyrical Dove

AP YouxiaHaikusaur - thus the legacy of the beauty and the dust of the nature's legacy

Nice writea month ago   

Lyrical Dove - This is really beautiful! I love the scenery! I can absolutely understand the feeling of tiny things going unheard/unnoticed! Beautiful! Lovely!a month ago   

 

先写了中文的底子

 

尘埃

 

窄窄的深巷

孤零零的老茶坊

晚春的残阳

透过斑驳的木窗

伴着尘埃彷徨

 

月弯躲进了云端

梦的门窗紧关

拥着深巷的孤单

清风拂过屋檐

不曾听到尘埃的呼喊

移花接木2022-05-18 02:23:00
我上学时就总爱对着阳光下的尘埃发呆
妖妖灵2022-05-18 02:47:49
是不是诗评要写成诗一样,让读者看不懂,才有味道?:)
妖妖灵2022-05-18 02:53:06
所以是美的遗产,自然的遗产却惹上了尘埃
忒忒绿2022-05-18 04:45:00
what was its autorank? 5?
梅雨潭2022-05-18 23:06:25
恭喜颤音。首页进来,谢谢网管,Dust 一首旧的 没看懂留言 推荐成功
颤音2022-05-19 01:12:44
深深的谢谢!
颤音2022-05-19 01:13:03
有道理
颤音2022-05-19 01:13:34
可能,没留下,是程序评
颤音2022-05-19 01:13:48
握手
盈盈一笑间2022-05-19 02:39:05
赞中英文双语诗!谢谢分享写诗的过程。原来是先写中文打底,学习了。