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原创《行香子:香墨芳心》
诗雨诗云
伊梦伊真
近而远
燕影仙裙
呢喃岁月
缱绻晨昏
寄一笺南
一笺北
两笺春
出尘伊笑
伊笑牵魂
远而近
玉影莲身
青衿岁月
红袖晨昏
念一生情
一生约
几生人
Tipping my hat to pursuit of
Tipping my hat 2 2 of you:)我觉得我的兴趣就够多了,但比起你们还是小巫见大巫:)
I’m tipping my hat to you, ibelieu . Thanks for your thought!
Thank you, Beautifulwind, for your support! BTW, strictly speak
“我觉得我的兴趣就够多了,但比起你们还是小巫见大巫。”是否包括小羊?
小羊大意,忘记加注:请活动主持手下留情,勿颁“柳七英文”奖。
Thanks for the kind words. I must say I’m proud of my
哎呀,来晚了!谢谢小羊的帖子。好美的一首词。喜欢!我开心地盈盈一笑间。。
小羊至今还未尝试用柳永体填“八声甘州”,所以尚不敢奢望“柳七英文“奖。实话实说。
盈盈不吝与小羊唱和,小羊总不能一声多谢就了事的。“行香子”词谱格律极有韵味,故选。
又说客气话了。小羊时有“失手”,只不过亡羊补牢罢了。亡羊补牢,哈哈!
It’s so…Oh man, words get in the way.
小羊客气了。和你玩古诗接龙的游戏,我受益匪浅。应该谢谢你帮助我。“行香子”选得好,很别致。欣赏!
盈盈,“行香子”重点在于上下阕排比,特别是上下阕末句。有挑战,有诗兴…
好啊。我们可以在这楼继续唱和。不过,我暂时写不了词。只能写绝句。会不会很扫兴?:)
I think it's your turn. Take your time.
你要不要去楼下听听听歌练听力?我觉得我听中文歌也不一定都听对的:)
谢盈盈。七绝唱和加点新猷。小羊和:一帘春色落飞红,梦在江南雨巷中。三两横斜疑燕影,衔笺何处不诗风?…
谢谢解释。现在清楚了。这比接龙要更自由一些。那咱们目前还是一东韵,对吧?还是你想换韵了。
I am working on it. Thank you, Beautifulwind!
I apologize. I was multitasking.
赞妖妖一如既往地善解人意。报告一下,我进入不了状态,准备颁奖典礼。怎么办?
I appreciate it. BTW, I just came back from 听歌练听力。
If there’s anything I can do to help, please let me know.
It’s your turn and therefore your call.
You motivate me too. I am dragging myself to study English.
那太好了。等我写个初稿,可以先请你Proofreading一下吗?谢谢小羊 。:)
我今天刚刚把图片给了欲哥,他说他昨天就开始在准备了。目前应该没有问题吧。我就是今天有点不在状态。出门跑个步。调整一下 :)
小羊好热心!谢谢你。奖项就是给每篇参加活动的文章,评议一个获奖名号。比如你--柳七英文奖。LOL
这次颁奖典礼是盈盈和欲哥负责,所以,还是由他们负责吧。以后有机会你负责好不好?谢谢啦
English? Idiomatic expressions make or break the speaker.
感谢白云!大家都是牙膏,挤出来的。小时候小羊对中文的兴趣也是挤出来的,无悔无悔!
That makes perfect sense to me. Thanks!
I am 挤牙膏 for this month's 活动。
I can’t blame you for squeezing the legendary toothpaste tube. I
I might have misunderstood what you said. Sorry for that.
BTW, not too many people can afford to “fill empty hours.”
LOL,你都把我逗S了,不用每个帖都中英文各回一遍啊。给楼下的帖多留一些在首页的时间吧:)
Rather, I tip my baseball cap.
Great! And great bilingual poems
I am truly grateful. Yes, classical Chinese poetry owns me.
By idioms, I mean informal expressions more than
I think it's a good idea. Thanks!
Time is our friend when it is not our foe.
I am still inching toward my target.
All in the name of the pursuit of happiness.
There's no reason to rush yourself.
谢谢小羊。我的古诗版,加写了一个现代诗版本。看这里:
现代诗版本. I've checked it out. Thanks!
"我觉得我的兴趣就够多了,但比起你们还是小巫见大巫"
"你要不要去楼下听听听歌练听力?我觉得我听中文歌也不一定都听对的"
"准备颁奖典礼" That's a lot of work.
"I am 挤牙膏 for this month's 活动" All the best!
"开场白可长可短的,随意随意" Well said.